Different types of sentences

In Hur3 we have been learning about different types of sentences like Very short sentences. We had so make a simple sentence into a complex sentence. That was the start of our paragraph. We had to do one very short sentence and 2 W-starts sentences. The W-start is where you choose a word out of When, Where, Whilst and while. Here is my paragraph... 

This morning he ran away yelling in the forest madly. He ran and ran as fast as he could. Beside the river, beside a lake and into a swamp. The boy sat down to rest as well as eat something. He heard it. He heard something that changed his life. Gun fire! The boy got down and hid from the enemy team. Whilst he got up in a good position to snipe them, he got hit, “Hit!” the boy shouted and put his hand up. While he was walking back to respawn, he knew someone was following him. “Could I just respawn?!” The boy whispered.

Simple to Complex Sentences

In Hur3 for writing we have Practising  on our Sentences. This is also a practice for the assessment that is coming up. For the sentences we have been changing some words and adding more detail to them. The example was The cat sat on the mat. Then they added and adjective, when, where and how. Then we had to do the same. But our first sentence was, The dog ate. It was hard to figure out what to do for the adjective. Have you done this before? Here's my work...

Simple to Complex Sentences

The dog ate.

The dog ate wildly.

This afternoon the dog ate wildly.

This afternoon the dog ate wildly while watching cats.

This afternoon the dog ate wildly and stopped to bark at the cats.

Red: Adjective
Orange: When
Green: Where
Blue: How