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Wednesday 25 March 2020

Facts about Puffins

Today at home we get to choose something we wanted to learn or do. I decided to do one what was were you got to choose an animal you wanted to research about and then put all the stuff you found out into a Dlo. I wanted to learn about some things about Puffins. Here is the Dlo.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Reuben, that’s a good presentation. I never heard about Puffins before and learned something about them from your post. Well done ! .......(Rose Arthur)

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  2. Kia Reuben, the quality of the presentation that you and Dylan have created is very good, I really like that you have taken toe time to draw the image on your cover slide, it takes some skills to create drawings with fine details. The text that you have written is well crafted and very informative. How and where do they build their nests? I wonder how long it takes before chicks are mature enough to fly? Perhaps in the future you could include even more detail, maybe increasing the amount of text from one or two sentences per slide to a paragraph so that you are building in more details to inform your readers with.

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