Learning story Poetic arts

So it's getting to the end of the term and we had to do some stuff about what we learnt and what we did in a learning story. In the learning story you had to do three things about what we did, what you learnt, what part was your favourite and what is your next steps. Also you had to write how you committed, What you achieved, what you did to keep on going what is resilience and how you respected people. I won't talk anymore so here is my learning story. Our teachers were Miss Birch, Mr Scott, Mrs Hastie, Raewyn Davis and Miss B. Here's the pictures. The name of the stories are The creation of tuna and the Taniwha and the Rakai Gorge. If you what me to know anything or if I need to change anything please tell me in the comments.